Marshall,

useing adjectives as Desirable, Better or I'd Love to see, are not suitable for this activity as we are involved to on this page if they are treated as a MUST! They sounds better for a beauty saloon instead for a pure tecno-creative matter as a photography. I am really surprised of your refusal behavior regarding that aspect (legitimately personal) of other's works! The only cricitizable aspect of our images here are the pure tecnical lacks and mistakes as Ghosting, correct alignment and tolerable and plesent depth and  image's size. The rest are our very personal decisions, point of views and opinions. Judjing what you simply don't like as a mistake is not only naif but offensives sometimes! If I decided to photograph my personages that way, that remains my personal way to represent my persons in my photos and That's all. Obviously you can show your disaproval sentiment about that but you can not give me a lesson as if I committed a mistake! That's the whole point we are argewing about. 

cheers,

Dariush    

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